Saturday, June 21, 2014

War (copyright 2014 Alan Riehl) From my short story compilation Levels

It's not often that I have a short story short enough to put in my blog.  I really like War, because it has something that I am a major fan of in any story...a twist.  The link http://www.amazon.com/Levels-Alan-Riehl/dp/1477542051, takes you to amazon.com if you want to buy my short story compilation, Levels.  I don't usually sale my wares in my blog, but war is free for you to read here.  If you like it, please let me know.

Another one of the short stories from Levels has been submitted to the L. Ron Hubbard Writer of the Future contest.  Labels.  Thanks.  I promise a regular blog next time. :)  Maybe.  Alan Riehl

WAR

BASTARDS! Everywhere I look, everyone around me is getting killed!  I know it's war.  You have to expect this kind of thing when you wage war against an enemy that has more power than you.  We didn't start the war though, but I guarantee that we will end it.

I don't even remember how it started; all I know is that once it began, I lost my family and friends.  We're hungry!  Why would we be slaughtered simply because we are looking for food?  What kind of barbarians would kill without question or reason?  We wouldn't.  We eat what we find and they don't make it any easier.  We didn't ask to be starving.  We didn't ask to be where we are.  We just want to live.  Is that too much to ask?  It must be. 

They slaughter us when they see us for fear that we will take their food.  It reminds me of the brutal acts that happen all of the time in the name of survival.  We had to team up with the Germans to make a difference.  The Germans are amazing.  They see something and take it!  They are ruthless and relentless and in this war that's exactly what we need.  The Americans still don't trust them but we need them right now.  This war is too big for us to take on the enemy by ourselves.

The enemy is strong.  They use chemical weapons and traps of all kinds to kill us where we stand.  Luckily for us they have no clue as to how many of us there are.  We are everywhere and can be hidden if we so desire.  We are non violent by nature towards those more powerful then us.  We have been forced to turn cannibalistic to eat.  That's how bad it is.  No war has kept us fighting this long.  No one really knows, or probably cares, how or when it began.  Like I said, we didn't start it. 

We would have never even bothered with them had they just left us alone.  Is wanting to feed your family a reason to kill us?  I really don't understand how they can just kill without trying to communicate with us.  They capture some of us and then run all kinds of horrible tests on us.  A lot of us never survive those tests.  I guess they want to learn about how to make a stronger weapon against us.  I wish someone would try to talk to us.  Our greatest minds can't conceive what drives them.  This is the worst kind of prejudice.

They call us barbaric as they slaughter us by the thousands for no apparent reason.  I managed to pick up the trail of those responsible for the last attack.  I know I shouldn't go alone, but our numbers are depleting and we can't spare the bodies.  The majority have to search for food.  Food.

It's always food!  Why is it always about food?  Can we help it that we don't know anything about farming or making our own food?  Can we be blamed that no one ever taught us to do anything but scavenge and reproduce?    We try to seek out help but no one will listen to our pleas.  We are forced to live underground.  We don't get all of the fancy domiciles that "they" get.  We have no skills.  We have nothing.

Destroy!  That's the only thing they know how to do.  Well we've had it!  I am tracking the people responsible for wiping us out without a thought.  It's easier to travel at night because we have camouflage for specifically the darker hours.  I'm not the tracker that I once was, but it started to come back to me. 

I can't believe that they would say time and time again how much we all looked alike.  Racist bastards!  I can't sit back and take it anymore.  We've lost so many.  They have lost no one.  What kind of a war is this?   How can one side lose thousands upon thousands and the other side have no casualties at all?  The time for reasoning is over.  The time for our leaders to come up with a solution is over.  The time for complete annihilation is here. 

The Germans have caused the most damage because they have infiltrated the very homes of these killers and taken over.  They have destroyed and violated them to the very core of their existence.  Why can't we be that organized?   Even with the Germans helping us, still no causalities on their end. 

I am tracking the army that is responsible for the latest slaughter.  My only communication is short wave and we can't spare anyone for recon missions anymore.  No one ever comes back.  I'm coming back. 

I wait patiently as I see where their leader is going.  This is the man that has the power to destroy us.  This is the man that supplies the chemical weapons and makes sure that we are all exterminated.  It's actually rather funny that we survived the holocaust.  The Germans are on our side. 

We always survive.  That's what we know how to do despite the fact that our numbers are frighteningly low.    One man is responsible for the decimation of my faction.  It really doesn't seem possible.  I see his home.  The place where he feels secure.  The Germans haven't been here yet.  He's ready.  He's always ready.

I work my way to the window and peer inside.  I see his beautiful home.  I can see the kitchen from here. Look at all of the food!  That could support my whole regiment with what I see!  Unbelievable. 

This is the man who orchestrated the obliteration of my team, my friends, my family, my wife.  It's my turn now.  I'll start with his wife and then him.  I position myself at the window where I can be seen, but not by him.  I want his wife to see me.

It's hard to get her attention without getting his attention.   I know I can find a way inside.  I always do.  She is preparing his meal.  She is moving back and forth from the window near me to the kitchen.  I am thinking two, no, three jumps ahead.  I know as soon as she sees me I won't have a lot of time to get inside.

I move back and forth outside the window for some time trying desperately to get her attention.  Then luck smiles upon me as he walks up to her and I can only assume they are talking.  His back is to me and she is facing me.  They are only about 20 feet away from me.  It's now or never!

I jump up once and I seemed to have gotten her attention as I could see her quickly look around him to see what caught her eye.  I jump again and again.  I see her face as she has a look of horror once she realizes just how close I am to them.  She puts her hand over her mouth and he rushes towards the front door.  I make my break for the front door as well.  There are plenty of places that I could hide in by the front door to allow me a chance to sneak inside once the door is open.

I hide behind a bush as I see the front door fly open.  He is ready to kill.  He has his chemical weapon ready as he runs over to the window I had just been at moments before.  The fool left the door open.  It was slowly closing on its own as I make a mad lunge for it.  I didn't want to give his wife any reason to look towards the front door and I had no idea if she was waiting at the entrance for his return.  I would have to take that chance.
I knew that if I confronted her, I would have to take her out of the equation as well.

I dove right in as the door closed behind me.  I looked all around without moving; wondering if she saw me.  I could see her frantically looking out of the window I was just at.  I smiled to myself.  I had made it inside the leader's house!

What an accomplishment!  An accomplishment that will go unnoticed.  Usually when a soldier makes this kind of an accomplishment it happens when he's on a suicide mission.  I knew that the possibility of me coming back from this mission was a long-shot.  I know that no one will know how close I came unless I can exterminate the leader and his wife.  Never has so much been on my back.  I could feel the weight of the world crushing me with this amount of responsibility.  It had to be done.

I raced towards the kitchen and hugged the wall as best I could.  I could see the woman standing at the window looking at her spouse trying to find me.  HAHA!  Don't they realize that my kind has been doing this for generations?  If they really knew how many of us were out there, they would rethink, well, everything! 

This is the moment of revenge!  This is the time to avenge all of the thousands of deaths that he is responsible for!  First the woman, so he can watch her die.

I must admit that I am bigger than most of my kind.  I was born for this. It seemed like everything started going in slow motion from that point forward.  I ran towards the woman just as I saw her turn around with a look of horror that I will remember the rest of my days; however many that will be.  Just then he saw me through the window and made a dash for the door to get back inside!  I knew my time was now!

I ran full speed at her as she fell against the wall, frightened beyond belief at what I am obviously capable of doing to her, no doubt.  Her screams were music to me as I was so close now.

I never realized they were this big up close...

SPLAT!!!

The man now stands over his frightened wife as he helps her to her feet.  They embrace as he moves her away from the scene. The man looks down at his shoe as he lifts it up and sees the remains of a very squashed and very large cockroach covering more than half of the bottom of his sole. 

"Damned roaches.  I must have killed a thousand of those things just this year alone." He grimaces as he wipes his shoe off with a tissue he grabbed from one of the end tables.

His wife embraces him again as she smiles.  "If it wasn't for those 'damned roaches', we wouldn't be able to live in our wonderful house.  They pay for us to live comfortably."

"Yeah.  I guess you're right."

The man smiles as he rubs the back of his neck.  We move out through the front window and see a van parked in the carport.  It has a magnetic sign on the driver’s side door with a logo of a roach on its back and the words:  Faraday Exterminators.

We see something under one of the tires.  As we look closer, it appears to be a roach right by the thickest part of the tread.  It appears to be looking towards the house.  As we get closer still, we see the roach as close as we would dare.  The antennae moving in the direction of the house.  As we get a close up on the mouth, one would easily mistake this look as a smile.

The war wages on my friend.  You think this is over and yet we are legion.  You kill us with your chemicals and yet we are still everywhere.  You underestimate our numbers.  We will be the last thing you ever see...

The war wages on indeed.  As we now see a total bird's eye view of the street in front of the Exterminator's house. There is movement from tiny creatures coming from everywhere.  Tiny little bodies coming up from the sewers; out from under Garden Gnomes; out from holes in rock walls and from every dark spot you can imagine.  All converging onto one lone house at the end of the street. 


The age old battle begins anew...Levels by Alan Riehl amazon.com

Saturday, May 24, 2014

Hi. Remember me?

There is nothing harder than to find time to write my blog.  Well, okay, there are harder things.  Maybe I should say, there is nothing harder to remember than to write a blog.

I have been extremely busy ghost writing for several authors.  Riehl Faith Productions is doing great and we even have to hire some Independent Contractors for writing and editing, because Kathryn and I are loaded with work.  If you're in the Las Cruces, New Mexico area and would like to be a part of something huge, please send writing and/or editing samples to alanriehl@hotamail.com

One more plug.  I will be teaching two writing classes this June!  Introduction to Novel Writing and Introduction to Screenwriting will be held at the East Mesa Campus of Dona Ana Community College.  Follow this link http://www.riehlfaithproductions.com/   to follow another link to sign up.  The next classes I do will be online.  Hindsight is 20/20. Deadline is June 4, 2014.  While you're at our website, make sure you check out Kathryn's first book:  Flippy the Fly!  It's the first book in a series made to help Children with enunciation problems.

I'm halfway through and I realized that this is my catch-up blog.  I appreciate your patience and will try to be more regular.

While it's on my mind, I'd like to talk a little about writing from the heart.  I encourage all of you to write what you want and not what others are telling you write.  Unless of course, you are signed with a major publisher.  There is a world filled with advice-givers who you have to keep dodging to put out a marketable and a passionate piece of work.

It's all about the passion my friends.  If you don't feel it, your readers won't feel it.  I believe I've mentioned it before, but when I kill a character in one of my novels, I get choked up and sometimes even shed a tear.  That's what I'm talking about.

I've also seen a lot of authors giving up after having published only a couple of books.  Let me tell you something and then I'll leave you wondering when my next blog will come out.  Unless you've written something and tried to sell it, you have no idea how hard it is.  Writing it's a life changing event that will seep into your soul and take over any other career choices you might consider.  It also calls for sacrifice.  There are no short cuts and no easy path to making a living as a writer.  I am blessed enough to be able to call writing my daytime job, but remember one important fact...I'm succeeding by writing for other people.

I could put my time and blood into writing for myself and maybe someday I will have that time, but for now I am glad to be working.

I guess my advice would be:  Don't be too proud or think that you're too good to write for anyone.  Don't overlook all possibilities and don't ever give up...ever.  Did I say ever?  No one can stop you but you.

I don't push myself to my limits, because I don't believe I have any. Yeah, you can use it.

 It may take you years or even decades to get where you want to be.  It took me about 8 years and I'm still growing.  Don't ever think you know everything.  That's my last bit of advice for today.

God bless and Happy Memorial day Weekend.  Never forget the ones who sacrificed their lives for our country!   Alan Riehl Riehl Faith Productions CEO/CFO/Head Writer